She is being told to speak singly
Rush not those words
And take deep breaths
But the reality, by God,
is as depressing as it is saddening.
Because over this,
She almost has no control
Many of these battles he loses
Some he wins
Draining his lungs of air in the process
But whatever you do
Never look away when he speaks
During that vocal battle
A moment that characterised by closed eyes
May be accentuated by gaped mouths, clenched fists
And probably downward glances and tramped feet
He is aware
But do not look away.
He wants your attention
She silently begs for eye contact
at that lowest moment
In the heat of battle
When the words make their exit
That victorious moment
When those words make it out in one piece
O-or t-two pp-pieces
_aJibola
* Stammering affects more than seventy million people worldwide.
photo credits
: http://suburbanprepping.com/the-sound-of-silence-by-disturbed/
That was awesome, bro! The 3 parts bound together beautifully. Truly inspiring! Keep it up, bro 🙂
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Thanks man. i do appreciate.
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Good piece
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Means a lot to me. Thanks a whole lot
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Very awesome
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Magnificently Magical!
How awesome in perspective when gender has been applied so precisely. How briliantly expressed when inner monologue is engaged. What a literary genius you are to note that the inner ear can be louder than the outer ear, and how common this actually is! Let us voyer in your mind more please, bravo!!!!
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I really do not know how to respond to all of this but thank you so very much for the kind words, Betty. I truly do appreciate.
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